From 0e0d46167240bb8f661967c8e0c427c95c4e4c4f Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Nicholas Johnson <nicholas.johnson@cfpb.gov>
Date: Tue, 3 Dec 2024 09:03:30 -0600
Subject: [PATCH] Update TCCP content

---
 cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/about.html        |  2 +-
 cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/landing_page.html | 29 ++++++++++++------------
 2 files changed, 15 insertions(+), 16 deletions(-)

diff --git a/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/about.html b/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/about.html
index a7e3277445c..54b7d72d85b 100644
--- a/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/about.html
+++ b/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/about.html
@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ <h3 class="h4">
     <h2>Is the data available for download?</h2>
 
     <p>
-        For professional groups, businesses, or members of the public interested in viewing the raw data, both current and historical, Terms of Credit Card Plans, data is free and available to download.
+        Current and historical Terms of Credit Card Plans data are free and available to download for professional groups, businesses, or members of the public interested in viewing the raw data.
     </p>
     <p>
         <a
diff --git a/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/landing_page.html b/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/landing_page.html
index 9992bcf9ce7..e49c35a4300 100644
--- a/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/landing_page.html
+++ b/cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/landing_page.html
@@ -61,32 +61,31 @@ <h2>
         </h2>
         <ul class="m-list">
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                No paid advertising.
+                No paid advertising
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                Interest rates are rated, to help you compare.
+                Interest rates are rated, to help you compare
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                This tool is updated every six months
-                {%- if stats.first_report_date %}
-                and is currently based on data from {{ date(stats.first_report_date) }}
-                {%- endif %}.
-                Advertised purchase APRs change over time. Check rates before applying and
+                Cards from
                 <a
                     href="{{ url('tccp:about') }}"
-                >learn more about the data</a>.
+                >150 companies required to submit data</a>
+                plus others who voluntarily contribute, creating a larger pool of cards, including ones you’ve never heard of with great rates
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
                 <a
-                    href="{{ url('tccp:about') }}"
-                >150 credit card companies are required by law to submit data to us</a>
-                but any credit card company can voluntarily contribute data, creating a larger pool of cards, including banks you’ve never heard of with great rates.
+                    href="/data-research/credit-card-data/terms-credit-card-plans-survey/"
+                >Data is public</a>
+                and can be downloaded and used by anyone
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                Data is public and can be used by anyone.
-                <a
-                    href="/data-research/credit-card-data/terms-credit-card-plans-survey/"
-                >Download the current data</a>.
+                {%- if stats.first_report_date %}
+                    Based on data from {{ date(stats.first_report_date) }}, and
+                {%- else %} 
+                    Data
+                {%- endif %}
+                updated every six months (purchase APRs change over time, check rates before applying)
             </li>
         </ul>
     </div>