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agrc · Mar 25, 2024 · c90d73a · c90d73a
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diff --git a/src/pages/_partials/ApiDescription.astro b/src/pages/_partials/ApiDescription.astro
@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@
 </p>
 <p>
   Searching allows you to explore more than 1,000,000 rows of spatial SGID data. With over 300 layers of real-world data
-  in the SGID, the possibilities can be a little overwhelming. You need a way to sift through all that information and
-  make sense of it, and our search endpoint helps you do that. It opens up the opportunity for serious information
-  gathering to enhance your applications.
+  in the SGID, the possibilities can be a little overwhelming. You need a way to find what you need in all that data,
+  and our search endpoint helps you do that. It opens up the opportunity for serious information gathering to enhance
+  your application and workflows.
 </p>
diff --git a/src/pages/products/api.astro b/src/pages/products/api.astro
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
         >
           <Image slot="image" src={signUpPhoto} alt="a person filling out a form" class="block h-44" />
           The UGRC API is a free service that allows you to geocode and search SGID data. To use the API, you need to create
-          an account and then generate keys for each of your applications. These keys are used to authenticate requests and
+          an account and then generate keys for each of your use cases. These keys are used to authenticate requests and
           provide you usage analytics. Click the link below to get started.
         </CardWithTopImage>
         <CardWithTopImage title="Documentation" actionText="Start learning" actionUrl="https://api.mapserv.utah.gov/">
@@ -82,9 +82,9 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
             alt="a person installing a program on a computer with a loading screen"
             class="block h-44"
           />
-          The API Client is a desktop application for geocoding Utah addresses with the API without needing to how to use
-          the API directly. It requires no license and is free for anyone to use. Click the link below to download the API
-          Client and start visualizing your data.
+          The API Client is a desktop application created to guide you through the process of geocoding Utah addresses with
+          the UGRC API. You do not need to understand how to use the underlying UGRC API directly, it requires no license,
+          and is free for anyone to use. Click the link below to download the API Client and start visualizing your data.
         </CardWithTopImage>
       </GridForPillars>
     </Section>