Product pillar revisions

src/pages/_partials/ApiDescription.astro

@@ -3,21 +3,22 @@
 ---
 
 <p>
-  The demand for geospatial and location based information has increased dramatically as many disciplines realize the
-  power of spatial data. A customer's address stored in a database has only so many uses. With this API, the door opens
-  to many spatial opportunities from visually seeing customer locations on a map to being able to spatially analyze
-  their relationship or patterns in conjunction with other events such as disease occurrences, natural disaster affected
-  areas, and other location based occurrences. This API's two main endpoints allow you to geocode and search SGID data.
+  The demand for geospatial and location-based information has increased dramatically as many disciplines realize the
+  power of spatial data. A customer's address stored as text in a database has only so many uses. Our API opens the door
+  to many spatial opportunities, from visualizing customer locations on a map to spatially analyzing their relationship
+  or patterns in conjunction with other geographic phenomena such as demographic data, disease patterns, or areas
+  affected by natural disasters. Our API has two main endpoints to help with this: geocoding address and searching SGID
+  data.
 </p>
 <p>
-  Geocoding allows you to find a geographic location (i.e., the geographical coordinates) from an address. UGRC's
-  geocoding philosophy is unique in that we would rather give you no match than the wrong match. But we assure you: we
-  will have the best match rates for Utah addresses. How can we be so sure?—Because we're the experts in Utah geospatial
+  Geocoding allows you to find the geographic locations (i.e., the latitude and longitude) of addresses. UGRC's
+  geocoding philosophy is unique in that we would rather give you no match than the wrong match. But rest assured, we
+  will have the best match rates for Utah addresses. How can we be so sure? Because we're the experts in Utah geospatial
   data.
 </p>
 <p>
   Searching allows you to explore more than 1,000,000 rows of spatial SGID data. With over 300 layers of real-world data
-  that you can run queries against in the SGID, the possibilities can be a little overwhelming. But the searching
-  endpoint really opens up the opportunity for serious information gathering. You need a way to sift through all that
-  information and make sense of it and our search endpoint can help you do that.
+  in the SGID, the possibilities can be a little overwhelming. You need a way to find what you need in all that data,
+  and our search endpoint helps you do that. It opens up the opportunity for serious information gathering to enhance
+  your application and workflows.
 </p>

src/pages/_partials/TurnDescription.astro

@@ -0,0 +1,12 @@
+---
+
+---
+
+<p>
+  The Utah Reference Network (TURN) is a high-precision global navigation satellite system (GNSS) Continuously Operating
+  Reference System (CORS) providing real-time corrections and data for post processing. Our network consists of
+  permanently located GPS receivers installed across Utah and portions of Idaho, Wyoming, and southern Nevada that
+  generate real-time, high-accuracy GPS positioning. These receivers send their data via the Networked Transport of RTCM
+  via Internet Protocol (NTRIP) to a central system that analyzes the input to adjust and correct the data to provide
+  the most accurate locations, usually down to centimeter level. Our network uses the Trimble Pivot VRS Platform.
+</p>

src/pages/documentation/turn.astro

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
   pillar: Pillar.DOCUMENTATION,
   section: stripeSections([
     {},
-    { title: 'GNSS network' },
+    { title: 'CORS networks' },
     { title: 'Getting connected', actionText: 'Connect now', actionUrl: '/documentation/turn/connecting' },
     { title: 'Troubleshooting TURN GPS' },
     { title: 'Resources' },
@@ -48,9 +48,10 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       class="w-full max-w-[400px] rounded-2xl px-3 py-2 dark:bg-white/20"
     />
     <p>
-      The Utah Reference Network (TURN) GPS is a high-precision global navigation satellite system (GNSS) that provides
-      real-time, high-accuracy GPS positioning. This central system analyzes the input and adjusts and corrects the data
-      to provide the most accurate locations, usually down to centimeter level.
+      The Utah Reference Network (TURN) GPS is a high-precision global navigation satellite system (GNSS) Continuously
+      Operating Reference Station (CORS) network that provides real-time, high-accuracy GPS positioning. This central
+      system analyzes the input and adjusts and corrects the data to provide the most accurate locations, usually down
+      to centimeter level.
     </p>
   </Section>
   <Section {...page.section[1]}>
@@ -61,14 +62,14 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       alt="Satellites around the planet"
       class="w-full max-w-[400px] rounded-2xl"
     />
-    <p><em>What is a GNSS network and how exactly does it work?</em></p>
+    <p><em>What is a CORS network and how exactly does it work?</em></p>
     <p>
-      A GNSS network consists of permanently located GPS receivers, installed across an area, that generate real-time,
-      high-accuracy GPS positioning. All of the permanently installed GPS receivers send their data to a central system
-      via the internet. This central system analyzes the input and adjusts and corrects the data to provide the most
-      accurate locations, usually down to centimeter level. Our networks use the Trimble PIVOT VRS Platform. The
-      generated data is sent from the GPS receiver to the GPS reference network through a wireless connection using the
-      Networked Transport of RTCM via Internet Protocol (NTRIP).
+      A Continuously Operating Reference System (CORS) providing real-time corrections and post-processing data for
+      Global Navigation Satellite Systems (GNSS), like GPS or Galileo. Our network consists of permanently located GPS
+      receivers installed across Utah and portions of Idaho, Wyoming, and southern Nevada that generate real-time,
+      high-accuracy GPS positioning. These receivers send their data via the Networked Transport of RTCM via Internet
+      Protocol (NTRIP) to a central system that analyzes the input to adjust and correct the data to provide the most
+      accurate locations, usually down to centimeter level. Our network uses the Trimble Pivot VRS Platform.
     </p>
     <p>Our TURN GPS network supports a variety of devices from survey units, to drones and self-driving cars.</p>
   </Section>

src/pages/products.astro

@@ -6,6 +6,8 @@ import type { IStandardPageMetadata } from '../types/types';
 import QuickLinks from '@components/page/QuickLinks.astro';
 import Section from '@components/page/Section.astro';
 
+import TurnDescription from '@partials/TurnDescription.astro';
+
 import { Image } from 'astro:assets';
 
 import apiLogo from '@images/api/api-logo.svg';
@@ -40,9 +42,9 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       class="w-full max-w-[400px] rounded-2xl dark:brightness-200 dark:grayscale"
     />
     <p>
-      The SGID aims to be the primary source for state-wide GIS data in Utah by creating a single portal to datasets
-      created by many different agencies and organizations. With such a broad scope, SGID datasets live in many
-      different places depending on their type, availability, and popularity.
+      The SGID aims to be the primary source for authoritative state-wide GIS data in Utah by creating a single portal
+      to datasets created by many different agencies and organizations. With such a broad scope, SGID datasets live in
+      many different places depending on their type, availability, and popularity.
     </p>
   </Section>
 
@@ -69,15 +71,7 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       alt="the TURN GPS logo"
       class="w-full max-w-[400px] rounded-2xl dark:brightness-200 dark:grayscale"
     />
-    <p>
-      The Utah Reference Network, TURN GPS, is a high-precision global navigation satellite system (GNSS) providing
-      real-time corrections and data for post processing. A GNSS network consists of permanently located GPS receivers,
-      installed across an area, that generate real-time, high-accuracy GPS positioning. All of the permanently installed
-      GPS receivers send their data to a central system via the internet. The central system analyzes the input to
-      adjust and correct the data to provide the most accurate locations, usually down to centimeter level. Our networks
-      use the Trimble PIVOT VRS Platform. The generated data is sent from the GPS receiver to the GPS reference network
-      through a wireless connection using the Networked Transport of RTCM via Internet Protocol (NTRIP).
-    </p>
+    <TurnDescription />
   </Section>
 
   <Section {...page.section[3]}>
@@ -87,7 +81,10 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       alt="the UGRC API logo"
       class="w-full max-w-[400px] rounded-2xl dark:brightness-200 dark:grayscale"
     />
-    <p>The UGRC API is a free web service that allows you to geocode and search SGID data with HTTP requests.</p>
+    <p>
+      The UGRC API is a free web service that allows you to geocode Utah addresses and search authoritative Utah data in
+      the SGID with HTTP requests.
+    </p>
   </Section>
 </Layout>
 ../types/types

src/pages/products/api.astro

@@ -66,13 +66,13 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
           actionUrl="https://developer.mapserv.utah.gov/StartupGuide"
         >
           <Image slot="image" src={signUpPhoto} alt="a person filling out a form" class="block h-44" />
-          The UGRC API is a free service that allows you to geocode and search SGID data. To use the API, you need to have
-          an account and create API keys. These key are used to authenticate requests and to give you usage analytics. Click
-          the link below to get started.
+          The UGRC API is a free service that allows you to geocode and search SGID data. To use the API, you need to create
+          an account and then generate keys for each of your use cases. These keys are used to authenticate requests and
+          provide you usage analytics. Click the link below to get started.
         </CardWithTopImage>
         <CardWithTopImage title="Documentation" actionText="Start learning" actionUrl="https://api.mapserv.utah.gov/">
           <Image slot="image" src={documentationPhoto} alt="a person reading books" class="block h-44" />
-          There are many ways to use the UGRC API. We have created documentation to help you get started. Click the link
+          There are many ways to use the UGRC API, so we have created documentation to help you get started. Click the link
           below to learn more about the API and how to use it.
         </CardWithTopImage>
         <CardWithTopImage title="API Client" actionText="Start geocoding" actionUrl="/products/sgid/address/api-client">
@@ -82,9 +82,9 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
             alt="a person installing a program on a computer with a loading screen"
             class="block h-44"
           />
-          The API Client is a desktop tool to thoughtfully guide you through the process of using the UGRC API to geocode
-          your data. It allows you to geocode your data without any knowledge of the API. It requires no license and is free
-          to use. Click the link below to download the application and visualize your data.
+          The API Client is a desktop application created to guide you through the process of geocoding Utah addresses with
+          the UGRC API. You do not need to understand how to use the underlying UGRC API directly, it requires no license,
+          and is free for anyone to use. Click the link below to download the API Client and start visualizing your data.
         </CardWithTopImage>
       </GridForPillars>
     </Section>
@@ -96,7 +96,7 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
         title="Sample Code"
         href="https://github.com/agrc/api.mapserv.utah.gov/tree/development/samples"
       >
-        Sample code calling the API in multiple programming languages
+        Sample code calling the API in multiple programming languages.
       </CardWithPopularLink>
       <CardWithPopularLink title="dart-board" href="https://www.npmjs.com/package/@ugrc/dart-board">
         A react component for geocoding addresses and route/mileposts using UGRC's API.

src/pages/products/discover.astro

@@ -52,9 +52,9 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
         class="w-full rounded-2xl dark:brightness-200 dark:grayscale"
       />
       <p>
-        Elevate your GIS, CAD, and web applications with Discover, a cloud-based web service serving aerial imagery and
-        base maps. These services are available in both WMTS and WMS formats from the Open Geospatial Consortium (OGC)
-        for broad compatibility and are provided in the Web Mercator WGS84 projection (wkid/EPSG 3857).
+        Elevate your GIS, CAD, and web applications with Discover, a cloud-based web service providing aerial imagery
+        and base maps. These services are available in both WMTS and WMS formats from the Open Geospatial Consortium
+        (OGC) for broad compatibility and are provided in the Web Mercator WGS84 projection (wkid/EPSG 3857).
       </p>
       <p>Discover offers over 20 services that are free to use (however, a few require a signed license agreement).</p>
     </Section>
@@ -67,7 +67,7 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
           actionUrl="https://docs.google.com/forms/d/1vS0Yw9DKezmDcJOCU-2MA-xXTHPMp3mBW4Y16RxMI0o/edit?ts=5cf67b75"
         >
           <Image slot="image" src={signUpPhoto} loading="eager" alt="a person filling out a form" class="block h-44" />
-          Anyone can sign up for a free general access to our base maps, NAIP aerial imagery, and older high-resolution orthophoto
+          Anyone can sign up for free general access to our base maps, NAIP aerial imagery, and older high-resolution orthophoto
           (HRO) products. These make great backdrops for many different datasets, and the NAIP imagery is a great free-to-use
           aerial imagery layer for medium- and small-scale maps.
         </CardWithTopImage>
@@ -83,9 +83,10 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
             alt="A person looking at their phone with a fingerprint on the screen and a lock"
             class="block h-44"
           />
-          Utah state agencies, cities, counties, special service districts, educational institutions and their students,
+          Utah state agencies, cities, counties, special service districts, students and faculty at educational institutions,
           and tribal entities (along with formal partners of these groups) can sign up for licensed access to our latest
-          state-wide high-resolution aerial imagery in both streaming and downloadable formats.
+          state-wide high-resolution aerial imagery in both streaming and downloadable formats along with all our base maps
+          and other imagery.
         </CardWithTopImage>
         <CardWithTopImage title="Get connected" actionText="Get started" actionUrl="/documentation/discover/clients">
           <Image
@@ -111,19 +112,22 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
         Who qualifies and why.
       </CardWithPopularLink>
       <CardWithPopularLink title="Discover the docs" href="/documentation/discover"
-        >Discover new ways to use Discover
+        >Discover new ways to use Discover.
       </CardWithPopularLink>
-      <CardWithPopularLink title="Atlas" href="https://atlas.utah.gov"
-        >Explore our base maps and licensed imagery in your browser- no account required!
+      <CardWithPopularLink title="atlas.utah.gov" href="https://atlas.utah.gov"
+        >Explore our base maps and licensed imagery in your browser - no account required!
       </CardWithPopularLink>
     </GridForPopularResources>
   </Section>
 
   <Section slot="more-resources" {...page.section[2]}>
     <GridForMoreResources>
-      <CardWithSideImage title="Citing your sources" actionUrl="/documentation/discover/licensed-imagery">
+      <CardWithSideImage
+        title="Citing your sources"
+        actionUrl="/documentation/discover/licensed-imagery#citation-and-logos"
+      >
         <Image slot="image" src={citePhoto} alt="an arm holding a pencil on a piece of paper" class="self-center" />
-        Using the licensed imagery may require additional citation.
+        If you use the licensed imagery in a published product, you need to cite the imagery provider.
       </CardWithSideImage>
       <CardWithSideImage title="Base map update schedule" actionUrl="/documentation/discover/maintenance-schedule">
         <Image slot="image" src={schedulePhoto} alt="a person pointing at a calendar" class="self-center" />
@@ -135,13 +139,13 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
   <Section slot="you-might-also-like" {...page.section[3]}>
     <GridForYouMightLike>
       <CardWithSmallLink title="SGID" href="/products/sgid">
-        View the data from the base maps in the SGID.
+        Get the same SGID data we use to build the base maps.
       </CardWithSmallLink>
       <CardWithSmallLink title="UGS aerial imagery database" href="https://imagery.geology.utah.gov/"
         >Travel back in time with historic imagery.
       </CardWithSmallLink>
       <CardWithSmallLink title="USGS TopoView" href="https://ngmdb.usgs.gov/topoview/"
-        >Explore, interact, and download topographic maps from the USGS free of charge.
+        >Explore, compare, and download all the USGS topographic maps free of charge.
       </CardWithSmallLink>
       <CardWithSmallLink title="USGS EarthExplorer" href="https://earthexplorer.usgs.gov/"
         >Download vector, topographical, and remote sensing data.