Review of the use case side of the Solutions pillar

src/pages/_partials/TurnDescription.astro

@@ -3,10 +3,10 @@
 ---
 
 <p>
-  The Utah Reference Network (TURN) is a high-precision global navigation satellite system (GNSS) Continuously Operating
-  Reference System (CORS) providing real-time corrections and data for post processing. Our network consists of
-  permanently located GPS receivers installed across Utah and portions of Idaho, Wyoming, and southern Nevada that
-  generate real-time, high-accuracy GPS positioning. These receivers send their data via the Networked Transport of RTCM
-  via Internet Protocol (NTRIP) to a central system that analyzes the input to adjust and correct the data to provide
-  the most accurate locations, usually down to centimeter level. Our network uses the Trimble Pivot VRS Platform.
+  The Utah Reference Network (TURN) is a high-precision global navigation satellite system (GNSS) reference network
+  providing real-time corrections and data for post processing. Our network consists of permanently located GPS
+  receivers installed across Utah and portions of Idaho, Wyoming, and southern Nevada that generate real-time,
+  high-accuracy GNSS positioning. These receivers send their data using the Networked Transport of RTCM via Internet
+  Protocol (NTRIP) to a central system that analyzes the input to adjust and correct the data to provide the most
+  accurate locations, usually down to centimeter level. Our network uses the Trimble Pivot VRS Platform.
 </p>

src/pages/products/sgid/address/api-client.astro

@@ -120,8 +120,8 @@ const page: IPageMetadata = {
       >. Be sure to verify the email address you sign up with! Once you have created an account, you will be able to
       generate an API key that you will use to authenticate with the API Client. You are now ready to geocode your <code
         >*.csv</code
-      > files. The API Client will guide you through the process of geocoding your file and will creating a report of the
-      results that you can join back to your data.
+      > files. The API Client will guide you through the process of geocoding your file and will create a report of the results
+      that you can join back to your data.
     </p>
   </Fragment>
 

src/pages/solutions/for-emergency-response.astro

@@ -55,19 +55,14 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       class="w-full max-w-[400px] rounded-2xl"
     />
     <p>
-      Every second counts in an emergency. Accurate and precise GIS data is the backbone for a swift and effective 911
-      response. That is where the Utah Geospatial Resource Center (UGRC) comes in.
+      Every second counts in an emergency. Accurate and precise location data is crucial for a swift and effective 911
+      response, and UGRC is honored to play a part in stewarding this data and supporting Utah's emergency responders.
     </p>
     <p>
       UGRC empowers Public Safety Answering Points (PSAPs) by providing access to a comprehensive suite of accurate and
-      up-to-date geospatial data. This includes vital infrastructure layers such as service area boundaries and civic
-      location data. With this data, PSAPs can pinpoint caller location, ensuring emergency responders are dispatched to
-      the appropriate scene.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      UGRC goes beyond data provision, offering technical assistance and fostering collaboration between PSAPs. By
-      ensuring all players have access to the same high-quality GIS data, UGRC plays a critical role in streamlining
-      emergency response and potentially saving lives.
+      up-to-date geospatial data, including vital infrastructure layers like address points, service area boundaries,
+      and road centerlines. With these datasets, PSAPs can pinpoint caller location to ensure the right emergency
+      responders are dispatched to the right incident.
     </p>
   </Section>
   <Section {...page.section[1]}>
@@ -78,20 +73,16 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       class="w-full max-w-[400px]"
     />
     <p>
-      Service area boundaries are required data layers for <a
-        href="/products/sgid/society/public-safety-answering-point-boundaries">PSAPs</a
-      > and dispatch centers and include <a href="/products/sgid/society/emergency-medical-response-areas">EMS</a>, <a
-        href="/products/sgid/society/fire-response-areas">fire</a
-      >, and <a href="/products/sgid/society/law-enforcement-boundaries">law</a>.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      These boundaries define the specific geographic areas each emergency service agency is responsible for. This
-      allows dispatchers to quickly identify the most appropriate agency to respond to an incident based on its
-      location. Dispatching the closest and most qualified unit saves valuable time and ensures resources are used
-      efficiently.
+      Service area boundaries for <a href="/products/sgid/society/public-safety-answering-point-boundaries">PSAPs</a>, <a
+        href="/products/sgid/society/emergency-medical-response-areas">EMS</a
+      >, <a href="/products/sgid/society/fire-response-areas">fire</a>, and <a
+        href="/products/sgid/society/law-enforcement-boundaries">law enforcement</a
+      > define the specific geographic areas each emergency service agency is responsible for. These foundational datasets
+      allows dispatchers to quickly identify the most appropriate agency to respond to an incident based on its location,
+      saving valuable time and ensuring resources are used efficiently.
     </p>
     <p>
-      UGRC maintains statewide geographic data layers for each the required service area boundaries. These layers are
+      UGRC maintains statewide geographic data layers for each of the required service area boundaries. These layers are
       updated on a monthly basis and are actively used in the state's Next Generation 911 (NG911) call routing system.
     </p>
     <p>
@@ -103,24 +94,19 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
     <Image slot="image" src={locationPhoto} alt="a man holding a map in the city" class="w-full max-w-[400px]" />
     <p>
       When seconds matter, knowing the precise location of an emergency is critical. UGRC is as a trusted source for
-      this vital data.
+      this vital data, and our commitment to data quality and accessibility empowers all emergency response agencies
+      across Utah to operate with the same standardized and comprehensive library of authoritative and up-to-date civic
+      location information.
     </p>
     <p>
-      UGRC provides a comprehensive library of authoritative, and up-to-date, civic location information, including
-      precise <a href="/products/sgid/location/address-points">address points</a>, <a
+      Our precise <a href="/products/sgid/location/address-points">address points</a> and <a
         href="/products/sgid/transportation/road-centerlines">road centerlines</a
-      >, and other crucial infrastructure layers like law enforcement locations (<a
-        href="/products/sgid/society/law-enforcement-facilities">police</a
-      > and <a href="/products/sgid/society/fire-stations">fire</a> stations), <a
-        href="/products/sgid/health/healthcare-facilities">hospitals</a
-      >, and <a href="/products/sgid/society/open-source-places">common places</a>. This granular data allows emergency
-      dispatchers to pinpoint caller location with unmatched accuracy, ensuring first responders are directed to the
-      exact scene without delay.
-    </p>
-    <p>
-      Furthermore, UGRC's commitment to data quality and accessibility empowers all emergency response agencies (PSAPs)
-      across Utah to operate with standardized data. This collaborative approach fueled by accurate civic location data
-      from UGRC can mean the difference between life and death in critical situations.
+      > help emergency dispatchers to pinpoint caller locations with unmatched accuracy. Crucial infrastructure layers like
+      law enforcement locations (<a href="/products/sgid/society/law-enforcement-facilities">police</a> and <a
+        href="/products/sgid/society/fire-stations">fire</a
+      > stations), <a href="/products/sgid/health/healthcare-facilities">hospitals</a>, and <a
+        href="/products/sgid/society/open-source-places">common places</a
+      > ensure the closest first responders are directed to the exact scene without delay.
     </p>
     <p>
       Please reach out <Contacts contactKey="psap" subject="PSAP solutions inquiry" inline />
@@ -146,7 +132,7 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       > (NENA) standard. It includes the essential layers like road centerlines, address points, and PSAP, fire, and law
       boundaries. Additionally, the dataset incorporates many recommended layers, such as cell towers, county boundaries,
       hydrology lines (streams and lakes), incorporated municipalities, mile markers, railroads, state boundaries, and unincorporated
-      communities. The primary source for the NG911 Dataset is the <a href="/products/sgid">SGID</a>.
+      communities. The primary source for the these layers is the <a href="/products/sgid">SGID</a>.
     </p>
     <p>
       The NG911 Dataset is a great starting point for PSAPs wanting to explore what UGRC has to offer. It is updated
@@ -161,8 +147,8 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       class="w-full max-w-[400px]"
     />
     <p>
-      Navigating the ever-changing world of 911 data standards and best practices can be a challenge. Finding the right
-      resources amidst complex requirements can feel overwhelming. That's where the UGRC comes in! We are dedicated to
+      Navigating the ever-changing world of 911 data standards and best practices can be challenging. Finding the right
+      resources amidst complex requirements can feel overwhelming. That's where UGRC comes in! We are dedicated to
       staying informed, and here are a few of the resources and workgroups that we have found invaluable.
     </p>
     <BulletedList>

src/pages/solutions/gis-integration.astro

@@ -18,7 +18,7 @@ import routingPhoto from '@images/solutions/routing.svg';
 import { stripeSections } from '@utils/page';
 
 const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
-  pageTitle: 'High precision location',
+  pageTitle: 'GIS Integration',
   pageDescription:
     'Integrating components of GIS - data, analyses, processes, maps - into your business workflows, applications, and solutions creates the connection between mission and location.',
   pillar: Pillar.SOLUTIONS,
@@ -43,11 +43,11 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       census blocks, counties, or municipalities - location matters.
     </p>
     <p>
-      Integrating components of GIS - data, analyses, processes, maps - into your business workflows, applications, and
-      solutions creates the connection between mission and location. This connection can provide answers with greater
-      clarity by incorporating a previously-unforeseen geographic element and understanding. UGRC can help to leverage
-      your agency’s existing GIS to get the most out of your data, or create custom integrations from scratch to meet
-      your well-defined goals and objectives.
+      Integrating the components of GIS - data, analyses, processes, maps - into your business workflows, applications,
+      and solutions creates the connection between mission and location. This connection can provide answers with
+      greater clarity by incorporating a previously-unseen geographic element and understanding. UGRC can help to
+      leverage your agency's existing GIS to get the most out of your data, or create custom integrations from scratch
+      to meet your well-defined goals and objectives.
     </p>
   </Section>
   <Section {...page.section[1]}>
@@ -58,16 +58,15 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       class="w-full max-w-[400px]"
     />
     <p>
-      Don’t let your tabular data be bound to a sheet or database. By linking your data to a geospatial component or
-      assessing your data and workflows from a geospatial perspective, opportunities present themselves to examine
-      relationships between your agency or group’s interests and the myriad of geographic phenomena and data sets (or
-      layers) that are available.
+      Don't let your tabular data be bound to a sheet or database. By linking your data to a location or assessing your
+      data and workflows from a geospatial perspective, you'll find opportunities to examine relationships between your
+      interests and the myriad of geographic phenomena and datasets (or layers) that are available.
     </p>
     <p>
       Simply displaying data on a map is an excellent first step to GIS integration. Do you have a list of street
       addresses associated with the services or resources your agency or organization provides? Start by geocoding them,
-      plotting them as points on a map, then compare, contrast and analyze with other data layers in the SGID to learn
-      more and generate questions.
+      plotting them as points on a map, then compare, contrast and analyze them with other data layers in the SGID to
+      learn more and generate questions.
     </p>
   </Section>
   <Section {...page.section[2]}>
@@ -78,10 +77,9 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       class="w-full max-w-[400px]"
     />
     <p>
-      Below are some subjects that we’ve encountered working with other state agencies, local governments, and other
-      groups over the years - some innocuous and some relatively serious - to get you thinking about what the
-      possibilities are for your data. Get in touch to brainstorm, ask questions, and develop ideas for GIS
-      integrations.
+      Below are subjects - some innocuous and some relatively serious - that we've encountered working with other state
+      agencies, local governments, and other groups over the years to get you thinking about the possibilities for your
+      data. Get in touch to brainstorm, ask questions, and develop ideas for GIS integrations.
     </p>
     <BulletedList>
       <li>Strategic placement of services and resources.</li>
@@ -111,7 +109,7 @@ const page: IStandardPageMetadata = {
       </li>
       <li>
         <ExternalLink href="https://wri.utah.gov/">Aid in</ExternalLink>. the decision-making process to restore and
-        manage ecosystems in priority areas across the state
+        manage ecosystems in priority areas across the state.
       </li>
     </BulletedList>
   </Section>