Merge pull request #8669 from cfpb/tccp/update-content

TCCP: Update content

cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/about.html

@@ -93,7 +93,7 @@ <h3 class="h4">
     <h2>Is the data available for download?</h2>
 
     <p>
-        For professional groups, businesses, or members of the public interested in viewing the raw data, both current and historical, Terms of Credit Card Plans, data is free and available to download.
+        Current and historical Terms of Credit Card Plans data are free and available to download for professional groups, businesses, or members of the public interested in viewing the raw data.
     </p>
     <p>
         <a

cfgov/tccp/jinja2/tccp/landing_page.html

@@ -61,32 +61,31 @@ <h2>
         </h2>
         <ul class="m-list">
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                No paid advertising.
+                No paid advertising
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                Interest rates are rated, to help you compare.
+                Interest rates are rated, to help you compare
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                This tool is updated every six months
-                {%- if stats.first_report_date %}
-                and is currently based on data from {{ date(stats.first_report_date) }}
-                {%- endif %}.
-                Advertised purchase APRs change over time. Check rates before applying and
+                Cards from
                 <a
                     href="{{ url('tccp:about') }}"
-                >learn more about the data</a>.
+                >150 companies required to submit data</a>
+                plus others who voluntarily contribute, creating a larger pool of cards, including ones you’ve never heard of with great rates
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
                 <a
-                    href="{{ url('tccp:about') }}"
-                >150 credit card companies are required by law to submit data to us</a>
-                but any credit card company can voluntarily contribute data, creating a larger pool of cards, including banks you’ve never heard of with great rates.
+                    href="/data-research/credit-card-data/terms-credit-card-plans-survey/"
+                >Data is public</a>
+                and can be downloaded and used by anyone
             </li>
             <li class="m-list__item">
-                Data is public and can be used by anyone.
-                <a
-                    href="/data-research/credit-card-data/terms-credit-card-plans-survey/"
-                >Download the current data</a>.
+                {%- if stats.first_report_date %}
+                    Based on data from {{ date(stats.first_report_date) }}, and
+                {%- else %} 
+                    Data
+                {%- endif %}
+                updated every six months (purchase APRs change over time, check rates before applying)
             </li>
         </ul>
     </div>