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 ### Errors-only Self-hosted Sentry
 
-This feature is experimental and now in beta. Starting from 24.8.0+ onwards, users will have the option to choose between two types of self-hosted Sentry deployments.
+This feature is experimental and now in beta. Starting from 24.8.0+ onwards, users will have the ability to choose between two distinct types of self-hosted Sentry deployments, tailored to their specific needs and preferences.
 
-**Errors Only**
-This is an opt in version of self-hosted Sentry that is much more lightweight than the feature complete version. This includes features around Sentry's bread and butter, issues.
+**Errors Only**\n
+Opt for a sleek and efficient version of self-hosted Sentry that focuses on what we do best—tackling issues head-on. This lightweight option includes these features:
 1. Issues
 2. Alerts
 3. Integrations
 4. Dashboards
 5. Releases
 6. Discover
 
-**Feature Complete**
-This is the default version of self-hosted Sentry that includes many of the features that we offer on SaaS. This includes everything offered in the errors only version but also additional main features listed below!
+**Feature Complete**\n
+This is our default version of self-hosted Sentry that is most similar feature parity wise to our SaaS product. This includes everything offered in the Errors Only version, as well as many other amazing features.
 1. Traces
 2. Profiles
 3. Replays