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@@ -14,23 +14,23 @@ Hi 👋, I'm 18 and I study computer science while also working in IT.
 
 I enjoy coding things just because I'm interested.
 
-- lots of websites
-- working with databases
-- my own url shortner
-- hosting a mailserver
-- discord bots
-- a python library
-
-This website is a place for me to present these things and write about them, or anything else I want to!
+This website is the place where I present these things and write about them, or anything else I want to!
 
 ## About me
 
-I finished school in June 2024, and since October of the same year I'm attending something called [vocational/dual education](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vocational_education), where I go to Uni for 3 months at a time, and then Work for 3 months to then swap back again, for 3 years total. I hope to learn a lot more about IT/Computer Science and eventually work there.
+I finished school in June 2024, and since October of the same year I'm attending [vocational/dual education](https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Vocational_education), where I go to Uni for 3 months at a time, and then work for 3 months to then swap back again, for 3 years total. I hope to learn a lot more about IT/Computer Science and eventually work in IT.
 
 In Uni I learn the theoreticals of Computer Science
 
 At work I will learn more about the Infrastructure and Security side of things
 
-And in my free time, I code up all the interesting things I listed above
+And in my free time, I enjoy coding up all the interesting things I feel like trying out
+
+- lots of websites
+- working with databases
+- my own url shortner
+- hosting a mailserver
+- discord bots
+- a python library
 
-And now that I started writing about my journey, you can read about it [here](/blog)! I hope you enjoy\~
+And now that I started blogging about my journey, you can read about it [here](/blog).