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-title: Portable Document Format Accessibility APIs Mapping (PDF-AAM) Task Force of the ARIA WG
+title: Portable Document Format Accessibility APIs Mapping (PDF-AAM) Task Force
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-The Portable Document Format Accessibility APIs Mapping (PDF-AAM) Task Force is a task force of the [Accessible Rich Internet Applications Working Group](/about/groups/ariawg/).
+The Portable Document Format Accessibility APIs Mapping (PDF-AAM) Task Force is a task force of the [Accessible Rich Internet Applications (ARIA) Working Group](/about/groups/ariawg/).
 
 Some information on this page is also shown on, and may be more current in, the [PDF-AAM page](https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/pdf-aam/).
 
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 The PDF-AAM Task Force conducts its work using a variety of synchronous and asynchronous tools.
 
-- Teleconferences of the Working Group and its task forces (also see [meeting minutes](https://www.w3.org/WAI/ARIA/task-forces/pdf-aam/minutes));
-- Face to face meetings;
-- [Email lists](#mailing-lists);
-- IRC discussion on the [#pdf-aam](irc://irc.w3.org/pdf-aam) IRC channel, used largely for minute-taking;
-- [PDF-AAM source repository issue tracker](https://github.com/w3c/pdf-aam/issues).
-- [ARIA specifications repository](https://github.com/w3c/aria);
-- [Web-Based Surveys (WBS)](https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/159734/);
+- Teleconferences of the ARIA Working Group and its task forces (also see [meeting minutes](https://www.w3.org/WAI/ARIA/task-forces/pdf-aam/minutes))
+- Face-to-face meetings
+- [Mailing lists](#mailing-lists)
+- IRC (Internet Relay Chat) discussion on the [#pdf-aam](irc://irc.w3.org/pdf-aam) IRC channel, used largely for minute-taking
+- [PDF-AAM source repository issue tracker](https://github.com/w3c/pdf-aam/issues)
+- [ARIA specifications repository](https://github.com/w3c/aria)
+- [Web-Based Surveys (WBS)](https://www.w3.org/2002/09/wbs/159734/)
 
-These tools are used by participants of the Task Force. For ways non-participants can contribute, see [how to contribute to the Working Group and file comments](/about/groups/ariawg/contribute/).
+These tools are used by the Task Force participants. For ways that non-participants can contribute to the ARIA Working Group, including filing comments on publications, see [ARIA Contribution](/about/groups/ariawg/contribute/).
 
 ### Teleconferences
 
-The PDF-AAM Task Force meets the third Wednesday of the month, 1:00 - 1:30 PM Eastern Time. For more details, see [PDF-AAM Calendar](https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/pdf-aam/calendar).
+The PDF-AAM Task Force meets the third Wednesday of the month, 1:00–1:30 PM Eastern Time. For more details, including the meeting time in local time zones, see [PDF-AAM Calendar](https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/pdf-aam/calendar).
 
 ### Meeting Minutes
 
 [Minutes from previous meetings](https://www.w3.org/WAI/ARIA/task-forces/pdf-aam/minutes) are available.
 
 ### Mailing Lists
 
-The PDF-AAM Task Force uses the [email protected] mailing list ([mailing list archives](http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-pdf-aam/)) for email discussion. Participants are automatically added to the mailing list when they become a participant of the Task Force.
+The PDF-AAM Task Force uses the following mailing list for email discussion: [[email protected] Mail Archives](http://lists.w3.org/Archives/Public/public-pdf-aam/). 
+
+Participants are automatically added to the mailing list when they become a participant of the Task Force.
 
 ## Current Work
 
-The [Editors Draft](https://w3c.github.io/pdf-aam/) is expected to contain current PDF Accessibility API mappings.
+For the current PDF Accessibility API mappings, see the [Editor’s Draft](https://w3c.github.io/pdf-aam/).
 
 ## Publications
 
-The PDF-AAM Task Force is primarily developing [PDF-AAM](https://w3c.github.io/pdf-aam/). See also the [PDF-AAM Task Force GitHub repository](https://github.com/w3c/pdf-aam/).
+The PDF-AAM Task Force is primarily developing [PDF Accessibility API Mappings 1.0](https://w3c.github.io/pdf-aam/). 
+
+See also the [PDF-AAM GitHub issue tracking repository](https://github.com/w3c/pdf-aam/).
 
 ## How to Comment, Contribute, and Participate
 
-To join the PDF-AAM Task Force, individuals must be participants of the [ARIA WG](/about/groups/apawg/). Participants are expected to [actively contribute](/about/groups/task-forces/pdf-aam/work-statement/#participation) to the work of the Task Force. If you are interested in participating in the PDF-AAM Task Force, please send e-mail to: [Duff Johnson, Valerie Young](mailto:[email protected],[email protected]?subject=PDF-AAM%20Task%20Force%20Enquiry&[email protected]) and include a little bit about what you’re interested in and how you think that you may be able to mailto:[email protected],[email protected]?subject=PDF-AAM%20Task%20Force%20Enquiry&[email protected])contribute to the Task Force. Then follow the [ARIA Working Group participation](/about/groups/ariawg/participate/) procedures to join the Working Group, and once you have joined ask [Daniel Montalvo](mailto:[email protected]) to add you to the task force.
+To join the PDF-AAM Task Force, you must first join the [ARIA Working Group](/about/groups/apawg/). Participants are expected to [actively contribute](/about/groups/task-forces/pdf-aam/work-statement/#participation) to the work of the Task Force. 
+
+If you are interested in participating, email the PDF-AAM Task Force facilitators, [Duff Johnson and Valerie Young](mailto:[email protected],[email protected]?subject=PDF-AAM%20Task%20Force%20Enquiry&[email protected]), and include a little bit about what you’re interested in and how you think that you may be able to contribute to the Task Force. Then follow the [ARIA Working Group participation](/about/groups/ariawg/participate/) procedures to join the Working Group. Once you have joined the Working Group, email the group’s W3C Staff Contact, [Daniel Montalvo](mailto:[email protected]), and ask them to add you to the Task Force.
 
-To contribute without joining the task force, see the [ARIA Working Group contribute page](/about/groups/ariawg/contribute/) for general instructions. To contribute to documents under development, see [how to contribute to the source repository directly](https://github.com/w3c/pdf-aam/).
+For ways you can contribute to the work without joining the Task Force, see [ARIA Contribution](/about/groups/ariawg/contribute/). You can also contribute directly to documents under development in the [PDF-AAM GitHub source repository](https://github.com/w3c/pdf-aam/).
 
 [Current participants in the PDF-AAM Task Force](https://www.w3.org/groups/tf/pdf-aam/participants/).
 
 ## Administrative Information
 
-The PDF-AAM Task Force is a Task Force of the [Accessible Rich Internet Applications (ARIA) Working Group](/about/groups/ariawg/). It assists this Working Group to develop [PDF-AAM](http://w3c.github.io/pdf-aam/) and keep it in sync with WAI-ARIA.
+The PDF-AAM Task Force is a task force of the [Accessible Rich Internet Applications (ARIA) Working Group](/about/groups/ariawg/). It assists this Working Group to develop [PDF-AAM](http://w3c.github.io/pdf-aam/) and keep it in sync with WAI-ARIA.
 
 ### Facilitator and Contacts
 
 - **Facilitators:** Duff Johnson, Valerie Young
-- **Staff Contact:** [Daniel Montalvo](https://www.w3.org/People#dmontalvo/)
+- **Staff Contact:** [Daniel Montalvo](https://www.w3.org/People#dmontalvo/)